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Post by Zilfer Of Shadows... on Nov 9, 2006 23:06:46 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]anything to say? i not so conserned about the poll yet since its not done yet.[/glow]
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Post by Jack Of Blades on Nov 14, 2006 0:20:44 GMT -5
It was a stealth story but it could have been longer and more spread out with the ending. But I liked it cause it had Jack in in
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Post by philly on Nov 14, 2006 0:28:04 GMT -5
I agree, the ending was a bit rushed. But I loved the idea, very epic. And Alex having a child O.o didn't see that one coming. lol. nice story.
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Post by Zilfer Of Shadows... on Nov 14, 2006 21:30:28 GMT -5
lol YAY! at least i have someone who liked it, when i try another one i'm going to make it longer, then this. But i had some pretty good ideas... though after i was done i realized i had left juk out..... sniff.
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Post by Si Quan on Nov 14, 2006 22:08:54 GMT -5
Short but sweet. And yes, Xucoro had a lovely vacationin the Carribean.
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Post by Zilfer Of Shadows... on Nov 14, 2006 23:28:08 GMT -5
OOC lol.
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Post by Darth Nergul on Apr 6, 2007 3:21:44 GMT -5
I read a little bit, and I can tell I'm a little late to be giving a review. You should spell check, I like reading my stories with proper grammar and spelling!
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Post by bruinfamer on Apr 6, 2007 8:22:43 GMT -5
lol good work z
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Post by Zilfer Of Shadows... on Apr 7, 2007 0:47:03 GMT -5
>.> too bad nergul! i'll misspell words just for you! MAUAHAHAHAHA!!
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Post by Darth Nergul on Apr 7, 2007 0:48:50 GMT -5
BASTARD!!!!!
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